This is our first draft of our magazine advert. We were trying to incorporate a gobos lighting effect into our advert, however, we struggled to get this done effectively.
What went well? - The original record label is incorporated nicely into the advert.
- The font fits well with the theme of the advert.
Even better if? - The gobos lighting was incorporated better and worked well with the theme.
- The black box looks unnatural and doesn't fit the theme as its too harsh.
- If the font was perfectly central
- If the the whole title was readable. Currently half the title is behind the white background making it impossible to read.
- The font type is difficult to read and some letters overlap each other.
- The iTunes label and the record label aren't aligned properly making the advert look unprofessional.
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