Rough Cut Feedback

After having shown our rough cut to our peers www have seen that our music video's genre is not as clear as we thought it would be, on the other hand the narrative theories that we chose - Levi Strauss and Vernalis are obvious to the audience. This is important because we want the audience to read it in the way we want the audience to read our music video, and interpret it in the way we want them to interpret it in.
Furthermore we have found that the editing aspects are the ones that people thought were the most creative aspects of the rough cut such as the slow motion, layering clips together, props were also something that the audience thought were creative such as the rose petals.
There are also things that we need to improve such as locations, and the framing of shots.