Audience feedback on rough cut - Facebook

From this feedback I think it would be a good idea for us to shoot some extra footage that are more concept based to make the genre of the music video more obvious. I think by doing this it will make the ideas of the video more obvious to the audience also, making the video more interesting instead of the majority of it being made up by the girl in the music video. By doing this I also feel it will allow us to achieve the codes and conventions of the music video genre.